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Mag 39 |
I was going to wait to post this one until tomorrow since I have already posted three other pieces today – but fuck it. It’s my blog. Whatever. This is inspired by the photo from the weekly Magpie Tales. I don’t know that this was quite what Willow had in mind with this prompt….
“cock
sucker”
she says
“reap what you sow”
while she
diddles
herself
with her self-righteous
sacrilege
dont’ blast me
bitch
with your blasphemy
your hell will
mirror mine
when your husbands
fuck
the pretty one
up the road
up the ass
and bring home
the bacon to
your withered fat
holy cunt
Kharma’s a bitch
and a whore
and gives not
one fuck
if your twat rots
© 2010 | Micael Chadwick
>This made me chuckle. I love it!
>OUCH!
>Potent. Very.
>so I'm guessing dinner is out of the question?heh…I'm cracking up over Willow's comment
>WOW! Full of deep, dark, angry energy AND I loved it!
>HOLY FUDGE!! It's just wowww. On so many levels.
>yep, you certainly took that photo in an orignal direction. ^_^
>May I send this to the ex husbands current wife who was my best friend?
>Was she wishing you dead for having AIDS?
>That is not how I read it, but isn't that what poetry is about, subject to one's own interpretation?
>I guess that's true for any art being left out for human consumption. It's just alway jarring (as an artist) when things are reduced to their lowest common denominator. But that's what art is all about. It's all in the interpretation.
>Oh, thank goodness, someone else who says, 'fuck.' Very randy tail, I mean, tale.
>*guffaw*Not bad …
>Holy Cow.. this made me hurt.. in a good way….I just found out about Magpie Tales.. so cool.. I'll try the next one..
>Hatless, mad, with the unabashedverve to use "fuck" as a verb anda noun. I salute your take on thiscockerel in the stew image, andhave to say that, so far, your poeticsis the most audacious. My wife, myex-boss, my children, all tell methat I use fuck as every part ofspeech, and much too often;but so far in several hundred poeticefforts of mine, it has only appearedin print a few times. Maybe we shouldthrow caution to the winds andjust have a poetic fuck-off;whereby the toughest word inthe English language runs amok.
>I am cracking up over all the responses and reveling in the work itself! I am reminded of a youtube that made me laugh so hard I pee my pants the first time I heard it. If you want to know what I am talking about it is at this link.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEXHTIzEsSk
>You totally got my attention with the post title! Here I was drooling with anticipation over cocks and ended up in twatville. As always, great stuff! xohttp://rantersbox.blogspot.com
>IntensePowerful and to the pointVery Scorpion
>This was awesome, man…
>Hahaha – nice play on words
>hot damn….nice magpie…chuckling…
>too witty.smiles.
>I can't always get through all the entries in a week, so it's pot luck where I click at times but I'm glad of this random choice….your Magpie was bliss……!