Rust: Still progressing…

30 Apr

This one is taking a while.

“There is no umbrella
to separate you
from eternity

meanwhile an army
marches behind
in the rain

all your friends are
dead or dying

you are a survivor
with all the loneliness
of survivorship”


(from the book, When I am an Old Woman, I Shall Wear Purple)

3 Responses to “Rust: Still progressing…”

  1. Pam at 1:27 pm #

    I LOVE this one so much! Just LOVE it!!

  2. Jo-Anne at 4:39 pm #

    Looking good I do like

  3. lolamouse at 7:35 pm #

    There are so many emotions in this one. Don’t rush it. Let it speak on its own time. I love it!

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