>Click

24 Nov

>

the open door
swings both ways
you don’t like
my voice
pro prose
my verse
my song
my queer
fuck you
boot stomp
this fun house
of horrors
is mine
my heart has other
bleeds to break
than that of
your absence
absentia
dementia
dismissed
and disregarded
clicked
closed
and already forgotten

© 2010 by Micael Chadwick
All Rights Reserved.

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12 Responses to “>Click”

  1. Rene/ Not The Rockefellers November 24, 2010 at 10:22 pm #

    >the fuck you,glass half broken,if you were dying in the wilderness I'd let the vultures have their way with you… tears of a clownwow, this was so raw and open. well done. burned, actually.

  2. Pat Tillett November 24, 2010 at 11:37 pm #

    >Lot's of anger and intensity…I felt it!

  3. Mynx November 25, 2010 at 3:41 am #

    >Scary angry but wonderful. I love it. Thankyou

  4. Lynne H. November 25, 2010 at 5:26 am #

    >We must bleed in order to allow fresh blood into the vein.hard hitting baby…i'm here..always…

  5. mel November 25, 2010 at 6:55 am #

    >i'd leave a comment, but i'm sort of scared of you…;)(thought i'd de-lurk though…because i love your blog and your writing..)

  6. Georgina Dollface November 25, 2010 at 9:49 am #

    >You write things that I am afraid to let myslef think and say, buty need to hear. I don't have the courage to command words the way you do. – G

  7. David Waters November 25, 2010 at 12:55 pm #

    >powerful, raw…..amazing!

  8. Mrs. Hyde November 25, 2010 at 1:32 pm #

    >And don't let the door knob hit your ass on the way out! Big, inappropriately long hugs!

  9. Jhon Baker November 25, 2010 at 3:44 pm #

    >really dig this one, It may be my thanksgiving speech.

  10. The Absence of Alternatives November 25, 2010 at 3:46 pm #

    >"Already forgotten"Sometimes I wish I could.

  11. becca November 25, 2010 at 4:14 pm #

    >very dark but love it

  12. Mustang Sally November 26, 2010 at 1:23 am #

    >My heart has other bleeds to break …Just Wow man, been there … but never said it quite so elegantly.

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