>Beaded

10 Nov

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Mag 40

your trinkets remain
your scent lingers
but you were never here
the you i knew
exists only in memory
only in mind
a varnished monster
polished into prince charming
a dead body
reanimated
into my Frankenstein monster
to fit my fancy
pieces of you
dissolving into
nothing more than
chalk paintings
in the rain

© 2010 | Micael Chadwick

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25 Responses to “>Beaded”

  1. Kristen Haskell November 10, 2010 at 10:00 pm #

    >Oh I like IT! a vanished monster polished into prince charming wonderful line.

  2. Brian Miller November 10, 2010 at 10:03 pm #

    >nice. that was pretty cool…like the frankenstiens monster…and the chalk paintings in the rain…very nice.

  3. Everyday Goddess November 10, 2010 at 10:30 pm #

    >a dissolving fallen idol, excellent magpie!

  4. Midwestern Mama Holly November 10, 2010 at 10:55 pm #

    >Love the images this evokes. Beautifully tender and sad all at once.

  5. Mystz November 10, 2010 at 10:58 pm #

    >"to fit my fancypieces of youdissolving intonothing more thanchalk paintingsin the rain"This,to me is the epitome of utter disappointment in someone, a real letdown yet a washing away to the cleansing of your soul…

  6. The Absence of Alternatives November 11, 2010 at 3:07 am #

    >"a varnished monster"[[[LIKE]]]

  7. Nicki November 11, 2010 at 7:45 am #

    >I LOVED this.

  8. Rene/ Not The Rockefellers November 11, 2010 at 7:57 am #

    >how our eyes are opened when the shine wears off

  9. Laugh. It's Life in Progress November 11, 2010 at 8:32 am #

    >Love this! the imagery and emotion are unparalleled

  10. Miss Nikki November 11, 2010 at 10:50 am #

    >you're right, cool the differences of images yet how we both talk about monsters and betrayal… powerful magpie!

  11. Myrna R. November 11, 2010 at 12:46 pm #

    >Good magpie, lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it very much.

  12. willow November 11, 2010 at 2:21 pm #

    >Prince Charming to Frankenstein. An all too common transition.

  13. thingy November 11, 2010 at 3:02 pm #

    >Very lovely and sad.

  14. Glenn Buttkus November 11, 2010 at 3:04 pm #

    >Powerful yet tender, muscular and macho, yet vulnerable; a real poem from a real poet–macabre and fresh, and like some of the others the /dissolving into/nothing more than/chalk paintings/in the rain/really sums it up, and puts us in the mood for something sweet and sour for our next meal; and hey, you did not use the word fuck even once.

  15. Berowne November 11, 2010 at 7:03 pm #

    >Awfully well written…

  16. greeneyes November 11, 2010 at 10:14 pm #

    >I am new to your blog, I just started following it yesterday…but I love this, and I can really relate to every word. That is what I like most about it, every word has such deep meaning and was carefully chosen. It is sad but empowering at the same time. I needed this today, thank you.

  17. Mary November 11, 2010 at 10:41 pm #

    >That's a powerful sentiment…does anyone ever really know another? Very good piece.

  18. The Reason You Come November 12, 2010 at 7:21 am #

    >It's sad when you realize that your memory of a lover is better than what he ever was in reality. An emotional piece that evoked in me the feeling you wanted (I think) your readers to feel.

  19. Helen November 12, 2010 at 12:25 pm #

    >Monster as prince as monster … a story for the ages. Your Magpie really packed a punch!

  20. becca November 12, 2010 at 6:15 pm #

    >wow me again you did

  21. uma.a November 12, 2010 at 6:39 pm #

    >Lovely words …liked the way you write poems

  22. Reflections November 13, 2010 at 10:10 am #

    >I like this… powerful beings transitioning to vanishing evils… to just what we wish things to be.

  23. Tumblewords: November 13, 2010 at 11:54 pm #

    >Rain just wears on a person! Love this little piece!

  24. Caty November 15, 2010 at 2:27 pm #

    >oh this is a wonderful piece. it's funny how what we see in our mind/feel with our heart is not always what really existed…

  25. Lena November 15, 2010 at 2:31 pm #

    >What a cracking piece! Really touches the soul.

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